Talk:Human Stains: Chapter One
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I did a little bit of a cleanup on what was here before, although that was probably premature to do on a first draft.
I wanted to go back and give the guy and his wife names, because it seems to me that we're going to need at least one other character (and perhaps more) and it'll be too hard to keep the characters straight if they are nameless.
I agree with the name thing. In the initial draft, I omitted names and phyiscal descriptions on purpose to, hopefully, make continuing with the story easier :) At least now we know the wife is blond!
--OBOne 21:45, 23 Jun 2005 (EDT)
Mmm, it was me who added the new text to the story. I guess it took me so long that the site logged me out :)
--OBOne 18:13, 26 Jun 2005 (EDT)
Taking a hand now - I've made this Chapter 1 - it has the all the makings of being a continuing story Davglen 14:14, 24 December 2007 (EST)
